Subject: Tried to reach you at [phone number redacted] Morning Tony, I saw your resume online and wasn’t sure if you were looking to leave Tagged or if you already had. Your resume was outstanding and I wasn’t sure if you were considering scientific, lead or management roles…

Hmm…

Dear recruiter, You lost me at “Tony.” Take care, terry count: http://one.sentenc.es/

(If you’re about to ask for a favor, it helps to get the name right.)